but I think the fact that a lot of the “padding” consists of individuals talking about their own experiences and the bullshit they have to endure makes it more compelling.

Pretty much this and then some analysis cribbed from Weber is the core of the main book (also padding out the “why” for political forces proliferating these jobs).

Nothing wrong with this, especially as an entry point for libs. Doctorow isn’t nearly as pernicious as most libs.